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November 2007


She fell so fast, it penetrated her core
She has finished last, and now she can't find the shore

Slowly, another wave of pain consumes her
If only someone out there would rescue her

The pressure is too much
She doesn't want to be here anymore
She is about to give up
Then she won't have to be here anymore

Hold on, just a bit longer
You will see it is almost over
I will help you to find yourself again
We will find you
©2009 ~razelric
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Author's Comments

This one is very old. Back when my rhyming skittles consisted of just..repeating the same word and going "HEYY CHECK IT OUT!!!! IT RHYMES!! Yeah? Yeah?"

Eh...why not post it...

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OHHHHHHHH!!! Me likes. It has a Paramore sort of feel to it which is really good

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